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Thursday, 7 July 2016

Fire Brigade cup

Fire Brigade cup

On Thursday we went to the rugby ground we were playing ripper.I slipped in thick slime
mud then I tripped over Jaydyn
and we walk back to school when I came in the class Jaydyn was on the couch eating cake then I asked if I was a loud a piece of cake two and we had six games.

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  2. Nice story Haki I wish I could be at firebrgade cup but I didn't go there were some mistakes in your writing like when you write we walk to school it was meant to be walked not walk but keep up the good stuff Haki I love your work!!!!!!!!!

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  3. Wow,nice work but I think you need to put describing words and you might need help by someone so they can check it.

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  4. Hi Haki your writing is cool you have full stop in your writing.

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